by mossgirl19
Wow, a short piece full of love and hope. Love this. |
by The Po whet
Thanks for the comment,I so much appreciate |
by Ben Pickard
What an original little piece of poetry. |
by The Po whet
Thanks Ben,I appreciate so much for the comment. |
by Em
This may be short and somewhat 'simpler' than your other writes BUT the simplicity of this piece is needed as it's original and unique (probably mean the same but you get my message) and just perfectly true. |
by The Po whet
I totally get you Em,thanks a lot for the comment. I appreciate. |
by Ren
This is lovely! Well done! |
by The Po whet
Thank you for the comment, I so much appreciate it. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Very nice, short, like the the subject and the lines bring the whole story together. |
by The Po whet
Thanks for the comment Ken |
by Phil
superb |
by The Po whet
Thanks for the comment Phil. |
by Sai
Oh, this is lovely, with just a tinge of sadness at the seams. |
by Britt
Judging comments: This poem, while so short, holds SO much truth to it, and I adore it to pieces. I love the originality here, and the way the writer made us really realize that the days are long - the years are even longer, but to God, it's as though they're one in the same. The calendar - His timeline - holds hope and promise, and I absolutely loved each bit of this. It felt very intentional, very meaningful, and was a beautiful reminder. |
by The Po whet
Thanks for your comment Britt,I so much appreciate |
Amazing piece |