Comments : My candle of addiction

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, dear M, this is so excellent! Many things stood out for me - cremating my sanity, choking on invisible fumes, rigor mortis, ignite the fateful flame, again and again. I can feel the toll this fateful flame brings you when it is ignited and the pain left now that it is extinguished. The scars will heal...in time.

    Truly a brilliant write! And I absolutely adore this.

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M, as raw a write as can be. And thank you for your lovely words :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Out of all of your poems, this one stands out the most....it's deep from your soul and I feel it was hard to write, very proud of you! Your strength shines from within each line Michael, well done!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Andrea and yes no doubt a tough piece, but a lot of positively as you mention with your empowering words as always :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Oh wow!!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for your wow! Em I know you say it all in that word
      :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Andrea beat me to the nomination, lol. This is an extraordinary write, Michael!! I am blown away!! Raw, powerful, and full of so much emotion! Simply amazing! Much love to you!!

    (<3)^Click!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ren, lovely words and warming as ever. Reminiscing from a good place, of demons past for now, and the future :)

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats, Michael!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Sir Michael!! Congratulations on your win!! Awesome awesome awesome! :D

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Why thank you kind lady :)

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win Mr Michael!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Nams :)

  • 7 years ago

    by mysticalpisces

    This is amazing Dad. Xx

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    JUDGES COMMENT:
    My candle of addiction by Michael 7 points.
    This is a rather poignant piece which I can only assume not just by the title but by the sombre yet intriguing content which gripped me throughout that it is about the daily struggles of an addiction or more so the overcoming of an addiction and I truly believe this is a brave piece and I am pleased with Michaels strength to share this with us because any addiction is always hard to succumb. The word usage is very powerful and shows a great variety.