Yay, this is so sweet! I love the form, with OR separated, it made the poem alive as you read it, impressing on the reader the love and excitement of the writer as he writes about his loved one. Awesome job, M!

What a beautiful poem. I love the layout and spacing. it reads really well..

Well done.

Michael, the way you have formatted this really is superb and a pleasure to read. The words could be utter nonsense (which they are not) and I would still enjoy reading it!
*Quick thing in the first stanza, you've repeated 'a lot' twice.

Take care and all the best,

Ben

Thank you all for lovely comments :)

What an absolute gem of a piece right from the heart and onto the page.
Beautiful

Em x