I miss you (Acrostic)

by deeplydesturbed   Jun 27, 2017


Initially I thought I couldn’t survive without you

My lips continually begging for more
Instead I’ve realised I don’t need you
Sneaking your way back into my life
Shivers and shakes keep me awake

Yet I know it’s all for the best
Once they are gone I will finally begin to
Understand why I needed you in the first place

    report violation
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  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nams, well written acrostic. It's message is strong and it shows you are becoming stronger each day and that is awesome. You got this! Hugs my friend.

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    A wonderful written acrostic nam's, with so much depth with emotion
    Well done lady :)
    Warmth
    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    You ARE strong and you CAN do this!!!

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi, this is a clever little acrostic that you've executed really well.

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Nams, you nailed it. It flowed so well and the message is full-packed. I know this is still about your struggle to stay away from drinking, I'm happy that you are coping so well. And you write your thoughts about it so amazingly.

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