Comments : More than We Ever Were

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    This is such a heartbreaking yet beautifully written piece! The format is excellent, and the story told is one that hits very close to home. Well done, and much love and peace to you!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A really moving piece. This is that friends/lovers conundrum that people seem to suffer the effects of all too often. Should we cross the line/shouldn't we? and if we do, can it ever be the same again? In my experience, it's something we pretend we can get on with but, as your poem suggests, the reality is rarely so simple.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      It turns out I wasn't missing him as much as I was missing the contact. :/ But I agree and still stand by what I was ssaying in this piece, it's not always as simple as we would have liked or thought.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Have to agree with Ren and Ben...this is a moving piece and so much reality. This really happens. The poem is great.

  • 6 years ago

    by Walter

    I love this!...I could feel every word for myself. It is so hard to set the boundaries after you have been with someone for so long to just say "we're only friends now". But somethings will never change. Beautifully written!

    • 6 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      Thank you so much! The thing with this piece is it was about someone in particular but after some distance I realized it wasnt about him and who he is, I didnt miss Him with his Name. I just missed him with his physical presence. Which makes this a sad poem in a different way haha but thank you for the read and feedback.