Free Me

Take me away from this place
Abduct me from myself

^^The first line sounded like you were telling someone
dear to take you away with that person. But the second line...yes a
twister this is a thing I wish I could do too!

Yet I still accept this this task

^^I think one "this" will do here..

From this dark place I need to move
Reclaim what once was good
Ominous unbridled thoughts flow
With the melancholy memories of a fool

^^That is the moment where no matter how hard you
try you can't run away from the past and the wrongs committed
which makes you not like you at all. Pity we can't hide or throw it
away from our mind but retains as a lesson for life.

Heros we were not born to be
But everyone has that inner fight
Regretted acts, and deeds endured
Every day we rise, we strive

^^and this is life we learn from our mistakes and every time
we are about to do something it comes up as a reminder. Each day is a
struggle and each day we have to learn to survive and be good.

A write that makes a reader to sit back and agree...take care

No words...this is fantastic, Craig...

(<3)^click!

"Heros we were not born to be
But everyone has that inner fight
Regretted acts, and deeds endured
Every day we rise, we strive"
^^
One day at a time...one foot in front of the other...

We are sometimes our own worst enemy and when you spend alot of time by yourself well you need an escape..

Em

Craig,

This is beautiful, sentimental and definitely strong. Great write! :-)

'Every day we rise, we strive'

^^

That's all we can ever do, Craig. Great piece and nominated.

All the best,

Ben