Comments : HOW TO MAKE A POEM SING!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I always like your quirky up beat pieces because no matter the genre they always make me feel I'm there

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Em, you were on it before the ink was dry, faster than a shoo fly on a just baked apple pie! Always enjoy your precise comments!

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    The good music stopped, I was swaying to the tune! Your rhymes are always awesome, Ken! A lovely dedication.

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Mel, I bet now you could slant your verses as they sway to a new tune.

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Mel, I bet now you could slant your verses as they sway to a new tune.

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is a poem that sings! Liked the rhythm and rhymes
    that went hand in hand which made this a memorable read..
    nicely penned Ken!

  • 7 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Love the enthusiasm in this poem! I feel like it could be part of a musical. Lovely flow to it. Well written!

    "How about taking a hot shower on a chilly day, serenade yourself aloud"
    ^ Ahhhhh, this line! It speaks to everyone!

  • 7 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Zahra, I love to include in my poem things that everyone can relate to. As a young boy we had no hot water, not even a shower, we heated a large pot on the stove, poured into a basin and took sponge baths. In the summer my brother and I would go to the unfinished basement, put a hose over a beam and take a very chilly shower. Many years later when I got a job in New York City I was able to rent a small one room apartment in Staten Island. It had a stall shower and HOT water, the first time I got in the shower I began singing my heart away, oh happy day!