by mossgirl19 Jun 28, 2017
category :
Fun, humor /
about life
Mama always say smile to visitors |
by CJ Maleney
Judging comment |
I really like the repetition of the first line in each stanza. I think for me, it gave it quite an eerie feel. I honestly thought - having not looked at the category it was placed in - that something rather dark was on it's way. I thought a murder or something unseemly was about to occur in the last stanza. And yes, I guess I would've liked that. |
by Ben Pickard
If we can keep smiling when all around us is crumbling, then that is a commendable feat indeed. Having said that, it's not always easy, is it? |
by mossgirl19
Ahh, Ben! I read it and it's a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it! |
by Em
Fantastico!!! |
by Michael
Bless Mama and Miss M, |
by mossgirl19
Yey, Michael is smiling, too! Thanks, Michael! |