WOW! What an excellent piece :) |
by mossgirl19
Thank you, Nams! Yes, always smile! :-) |
by Brenda
Lady Mel, this is just lovely! Sometimes all it takes is a smile to make the day go smoother and the world a brighter place. Thank you for this-well done- |
by mossgirl19
Queen Brenda, thank you. I hope you are always smiling! :-) |
by CJ Maleney
Straight into favorites x |
by mossgirl19
Yay, thank you Craig. Means a lot! :-) |
by CJ Maleney
Straight into favorites x |
by Ren
My dear, sweetest Lady Mel Liz! You are on a roll! Another beautiful write by you! I absolutely love this! From someone who loves to smile and laugh, this makes me very happy to read!! Passing along a smile can truly make the biggest difference in someone's day!! You never know who may have really needed it. Amazing write!! |
by mossgirl19
Awww, dear Cowgirl! I am smiling too because of your lovely comment! I'm happy to make you smile. I think we always should. :-) |
by Michael
Bless Mama and Miss M, |
by mossgirl19
Yey, Michael is smiling, too! Thanks, Michael! |
by Em
Fantastico!!! |
by Ben Pickard
If we can keep smiling when all around us is crumbling, then that is a commendable feat indeed. Having said that, it's not always easy, is it? |
by mossgirl19
Ahh, Ben! I read it and it's a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it! |
I really like the repetition of the first line in each stanza. I think for me, it gave it quite an eerie feel. I honestly thought - having not looked at the category it was placed in - that something rather dark was on it's way. I thought a murder or something unseemly was about to occur in the last stanza. And yes, I guess I would've liked that. |
by CJ Maleney
Judging comment |