Comments : I'm the one who holds the pen till I die

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi, Everlasting! It's so great to read from you again, and what a poem! You do hold the pen until you die, and the ink will never dry. This beautiful piece proved it so. This is very relatable and I think we all stop somewhere only to begin great again. :-)

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Such a beautiful piece. Lovely images flow from your pen :)

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful imagery with superb imagery - loved it x

  • 7 years ago

    by Moe

    Or maybe you can be refilled thus never truly run dry, be it the pen or the pen master.
    I enjoyed reading this. Cheers.

    • 7 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Nah, when I die is going to run out.

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You always touch my heart with your creativity! This poem really got to me... I love your metaphor.....you took the pen and interwined it with your feelings in such a beautiful way! Love this!