by Michael Jul 3, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Frozen eyes glared; a chill in your stare |
by Brenda
Michael, wow (ok, so I'm borrowing from other comments, lol). This really is a powerful raw write- I loved your layout and the pauses added to the entire tone. Well done- |
by Michael
Again Miss Brenda, for your words...Thank you |
by Phil
Holy smokes!! |
by Michael
Holy smokes says it all Phil |
by Ren
I'm with Em on this, except I'll add one more word to that. WOW!! |
by Michael
Same applies to you Miss Ren. |
by Em
I have no words other than Omfg!!! |
by Michael
Em... expressional words as always, thank you :) |
by mossgirl19
This is so intense, Michael. I love where all the ; are placed, they created really effective pauses in this piece. |
by Michael
Thank you Miss M for your lovely comments :) |