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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is literally breath-taking Michael, with all the pauses you have in here. The rhythm is great. And quite an intriguing message. It's beautiful.

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Phil

    This is beyond awesome.

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks fella
      for lovely words :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beyond beautiful!!!!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Inspiring as ever Andrea :)
      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, this is so very cool! Sorry, so very amazing! Ok, I'm just blown away...in case you couldn't tell I loved it!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Oh Miss Brenda, such a way with words :)

      Thank you it says it all, I think I guessed right :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Michael!!! This write had me leaning closer and closer to the screen with every word I read, and now I'm covered in chills with a dazed little smile on my face! I think this is my absolute favorite write by you thus far!! Absolutely amazing, breathtaking, fan-freaking-tastic piece!! Love it!! :)

    (<3)^Click!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Miss Ren

      What an amazing statement. So very inspired by your words.

      Thank you so much :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this piece so much would have nominated it but Brenda beat me to it. I agree with previous comments one of your best x

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this piece so much would have nominated it but Brenda beat me to it. I agree with previous comments one of your best x

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Milly :)

    Thank you so much, for lovely inspiring words :)x

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Sorry i missed this one!! Well done Mr Michael. Glad its nominated :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Nams x

  • 7 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Suspenseful with a touch of humor. Loved it!

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Jessica for reading and your comments. Yes suspenseful... great expression :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem.

    • 7 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you AP lovely word says it all :)