Interesting poem. You showed how you can be fragile and strong at the same time.
You pointed out how scars can show weakness, or they can show courage.
My favorite line here was: "these scars tell a story." Because in a way it makes you think about what each scar means to a person, how they got the scar, stuff like that.
Anyways, great job. :)

Every scar has a story. A great piece that is raw and true.