by Phil
This made me tear up because of the honesty and rawness in it |
by Timothy
Thank you. Its based in reality. |
Definitely heart breaking. Wonderful write. |
by mossgirl19
Such a sad situation to be in. Raw emotions from situations are powerful. |
by Ben Pickard
This is a genuinely moving piece of writing, dripping with raw emotion and honesty. |
by Em
This oozes so much emotion that it gripped me the whole length of the piece and my heart goes out to you having to go through this it must be hard still loving someone and seeing them but being unable to show them you love them.. infact I know how it feels and it's heartbreaking but even more so with kids involved but as I'm sure you know (and I can tell with why you wrote) they're your priority. |
by Phoenix ¥
This poem is fantastic and captures the deep pain of a situation with no happy endings. Well written x |