by stormingdance (Lessa) Jul 9, 2017
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Draw your bow and arrow |
Beautiful poem. |
by Ben Pickard
I have never seen this rhyme scheme, Jessica or heard of a 'Balassi Stanza'. But I can tell that you have executed it very well without sacrificing the content and imagery. Excellent work, |
by mossgirl19
Wow, Jess, once again you have shared with us your great talent in poetic forms. This is lovely! |
by Michael
Wonderful piece Miss Jessica, and cleverly constructed :) |
by Hope
beautiful poem! keep writing. |