beautiful poem! keep writing.

Wonderful piece Miss Jessica, and cleverly constructed :)

Michael :)

Wow, Jess, once again you have shared with us your great talent in poetic forms. This is lovely!

I have never seen this rhyme scheme, Jessica or heard of a 'Balassi Stanza'. But I can tell that you have executed it very well without sacrificing the content and imagery. Excellent work,

Ben

Beautiful poem.