Comments : THE TEAR, THE FROWN, AND THE SMILE

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yay, dear Crafty Ken, this is a fun and enjoyable read, but what I love more is that the tale ended with the smile left and the tear and the frown will never be seen another day. :-)

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Yeah Mel, I wanted a happy ending, I'm always sad when in the Movies or TV the Love Story has a sad ending, so much for my soft heart!

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Yeah Mel, I wanted a happy ending, I'm always sad when in the Movies or TV the Love Story has a sad ending, so much for my soft heart!

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Sorry, another unexpected duplicate!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Ken,
    Firstly I like the name change its very fitting for you :) I love your rhyming, the stories you tell and the humour you tell it with.

    1/ This resonates with me too much, being cheated on isn't cool but this made me chuckle because of the "listening to that clown"

    2/ Hahaha I imagine her lamping him one after finding out about his cheating ways and then him legging it because she's grinning like a Cheshire cat psycho lady haha.

    3/ Love it and the message says to me don't let the bleeps grind you down keep smiling because someone will be calling in love with that smile.

    Another tongue twisty piece.
    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Em, I wrote this poem with a woman's mindset. I was not putting down all men, just the heartless cheating ones. I remember telling our teenage daughter about what guys will do to get their way, especially using their specialized word tool saying; I love you! After after my preaching out of fear for her, she looks me in the eye and says; Dad, I know all that! Love your great comments and praise.

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Em, I wrote this poem with a woman's mindset. I was not putting down all men, just the heartless cheating ones. I remember telling our teenage daughter about what guys will do to get their way, especially using their specialized word tool saying; I love you! After after my preaching out of fear for her, she looks me in the eye and says; Dad, I know all that! Love your great comments and praise.

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I love the way you tell a story with rhyme that takes me on a pleasant amusing trip with a nice happy ending x

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You do have a way to give woman power and at the same time
    make it entertaining and joyful to read and in a way encourage.
    Keep penning!