by Em
Andrea, I feel once again our emotions are in sync which is unfortunate though it's the other parent for me, my father. This oozes nostalgia and sadness which I am all too familiar with. |
by Jamie
Loved this Andrea, nominated! |
Very emotional read that more than a few of us can to relate to whether because of a father or mother experience. Superb piece x |
by Michael
Andrea |
by mossgirl19
Ms. Andi, I had to read it twice to understand the poem fully, and WOW, it is such a heart-breaking piece and I cannot imagine that mother's eyes looking at me and mirroring all my flaws. I think that it is a very sad state to be in and my heart reaches out to you. As a mother though, I get that I sometimes tend to transfer the blame to my innocent daughter by scolding her when I feel really bad about my life, which is not healthy and I always in all my control, avoid that. I do believe that a mother's love is incomparable. The world is just a little corrupted sometimes and hugely unfair. |
by Brenda
Andrea, I'm gutted by this-to have your parent look at you like-"Oh great, I birthed that..." My heart just tore out...hugs my friend- |
by Maple Tree
Thank you everyone for your precious comments. |
by Ren
Raw and absolutely heart breaking. A beautifully written piece full of such extreme emotion, Andrea. Much love to you! |
by P.S.
Souls grow, only the everlasting knows |