What a mind-blowing piece, Michael. Your word choice is great! The rhythm too is great, and the mood is intensified with all the semi-colons/pauses.

Time and time again the same desolation is faced by the world...same routine. And hope...has died. A great write!

Michael, your works are getting better and better and I admire you for your strength and bravery as I feel this is related to your forum post though I may be wrong. Your word choice is sublime.
I was going to comment fully but I just couldn't

Em.x

A strong piece with great dark and emotional depth. A most enjoyable read. Milly x

This is excellent, good man, and I particularly like the way it is formatted.

All the best,

Ben

Michael, a powerful write written beautifully. Each of your writes have gained strength and confidence. I really liked it a lot.

I agree with what everyone has said so far. This is such a strong and emotional write, Mr. Michael, and very well written!! Your writing is amazing, as always, and I agree with Ben- I really like the format of this! Well done, kind sir :) much love and peace to you always!