This is so Dam bloody cool,

Nough said

Craig

I love the build up just like the crechendo of drums in a solo. Excellent x

Mark I have to admit at first I was a little put off with the short sharp lines so I came back and re-read and I have to say I'm glad that I did because I fell in love with it and I'm glad that it's been nominated.

All the best
Em

Yay, glad that this is nominated too. I love this very much. I love the build up as Milly had mentioned, and the rhymes, the upbeat rhythm yet again.

I agree with everyone, especially Craig, this is very damn cool, and so freaking good. Glad to see this nominated! Well done!!

Mark, what a cool unique write. Love the layout and the whole story-super cool!

Judging comments: This is different and eccentric and special. Honestly, whilst reading this I felt a touch of Shel Silverstein, and brought me back to my childhood reading his stories and poetry. Very powerful and full of impact!