wow - another poem that shocks. Your ability is diverse - here you have decided to space each line. This, for me, created the space to absorb without confusion.

I like the dialogue, like a story, an image of an ER room. But this is more, a planned disaster, one that has followed on from the last.

The trailing end is like a soul leaving a body - one disaster too many. . .

Powerful stuff here. I was engrossed all the way and BAM! Well done-