Comments : The Better Half of Me

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A piece full of love. I like the transition from her to you. It's like you started thinking about her and ended talking to her in your mind. Great job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I wish I had a nomination left this is truly heartfelt and beautiful

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    This is gorgeous and so well written and rhymed!! Very sweet as well. Amazing job!

    "Like a white hot shooting star that skips across the midnight sky
    I'll make a wish upon it that this love she'll give a try"
    ^^^
    Beautiful!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is so lovely, well done

    Craig

  • 4 years ago

    by Nkululeko Xaba

    I'm in love with this poems well said