by mossgirl19
OMG, Plur! This is awesome! Great rhyming and good flow. I feel like the writer has accepted the sad reality that she is always left by the one she loves maybe because she has been there a lot of times. And the phrase 'just love me then leave me'... it reads like 'I know you will fool me and hurt me but I will still let you do it'. |
by beyouplur
Thank you so much!!!:)) |
by Brenda
This write is cool as hell. The pace is positively manic. Well done- |
by beyouplur
Why thank you:D |
by Em
This is fantastic |
by beyouplur
Tysm:))))) |
by Ren
Fantastic write!! Well done!! Love this! |
by beyouplur
I am glad. Thank you |
by CJ Maleney
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