i really love ur poem its so sweet great job

Good poem, and I definitely agree with what you are saying. In the second "stanza"/rhyme thingy, you rhymed 'you' with 'you', and I don't know if that was intentional, or if you mistakenly wrote you instead of something else.

thanks all, but yeah sean the you was intentional, it still sounds okay right?

Really Excellent work...great descriptions...i love the first 4 lines...Keep it up...

That poem is true, Love is life and life is love, i dont think anyone could make it through life without love even if its from your family. I love how you wrote this poem and I really like all your work...LiL One

hey knikki,
u already know how much i love and appreciate ure writting and especially this poem, u know how dearly i love this poem.......
luv ya bestie
luv jessycar

trully lovely... xx