Sick

by deeplydesturbed   Jul 15, 2017


Darkness sounds me
As I awake in a haze.
Spent the day in bed
My thougts a maze.

In and out of sleep
Head constantly in pain.
Panadol every four hours
And thats barely keeping it tame.

Not sure if its a cold
or if ive come down with the flu
What i do know is i hate being sick
Id stay far away if i was you.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Nams
    Be well soon and look after yourself.

    Much love

    Michael :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I will, Naomi and that is easily done for me, over here on the other side of the world as I am, lol.
    I hope you pick up soon.
    Take care

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Benny, glad your staying away ;) not that you have a choice hahaha - and im clearly not getting better quickly enough! Just re-reading this, theres a LOT of spelling errors hahaha! Oops...
      Oh well adds to the authenticity of me being ill!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Awww noo! Being sick is so not cool!! Get plenty of rest, stay hydrated, and watch some Disney movies!! I hope you feel better soon, love! <3

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    N. Sometimes being 'sick' is a pain in the ass other times it's a nice excuse to stay indoors, relax and ignore all people around us. I think I know what this is about and I assure you it does get easier and I'm sending you all the strength and love I have.

    The only thing I would say is maybe centre this as the lines are a little wayward but just my thoughts, it's still a good write. I hope you're ok.

    Much love
    Em x

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Em
      Im actually sick with a cold thing.. i alsp have throat ulcers.. :( just spent the weekend in bed.

      Xx

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