Comments : WHAT GOOD IS A HEART

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is an awesome honest write. The rhymes flowed out so well. The message is heart-breaking...I can read the hurt and confusion in the lines. And that question is truly difficult to answer!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I agree with MG Though I was a little put off with the caps lock

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I have to be honest, after going through these things, you certainly have a right to question the good of having a heart at all. I suppose you have to try and take the positives from negative experiences if that makes sense. You have two children, if this is literal, and you will be a stronger person when you come out the other side.
    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    As a guy who writes a lot of rhymes I absolutely love this, it's just a shame about the content. And as for the last verse.

    Unpretty? Pah! I've just looked at your profile pic and you're beautiful.

    Take cere

    Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    Okay.. This is going to the favs ! I loved how easy it was to read because it flowed so well. Also, the depths of the hurt and confusion and frustration you felt must not go unnoticed. A dam fool he is, i say ! Lol. Keep writing girl

    • 7 years ago

      by brittany williams

      thank you for your kind words i appreciate it means alot

  • 7 years ago

    by Marvellous

    It's natural to misquote cost. Till scarcity, value is lost. Pain comes to widen reasoning. All that happens tend towards win. After sales, bookkeeping follows.