Comments : The mysterious pisces

  • 7 years ago

    by Jamie

    Love this! Nominated

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    I knew you would blow me away, my clever angel and wonderful daughter :)xx

    What a beautiful piece
    Love you
    Dad x

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    If trying to find a way to express yourself was your aim then you have done it fantastically well.

    Regards

    Craig

    • 7 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      I agree with Craig 100%! This is just beautiful.

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Yes I have been trying to express myself through poetry :) thank you so much :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I was waiting for another piece from you, and you don't disappoint here. I had the feeling that there was an autobiographical element to this while reading? Not sure. Either way, I have known people like this: sensitive, passionate, mesmerizing, difficult, and always easily broken.
    Brilliant write.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      I study astrology in depth and have done a lot of research into pisces especially as I am one. But yes I was writing it about myself as well as piscean traits in general because I relate to all the traits. I combined my knowledge of pisces and my knowledge of myself. And yes I feel that I fit all of those words that you have listed. Pisces are the most sensitive and emotional of the zodiac. It would be interesting to know your sign? Thank you for your comment Ben!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    I too am a Pisces. Totally relate to this wonderful write. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      I think that we are quite a rare breed!! Thankyou. X

    • 7 years ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Taurus.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Absolutely adore this piece! Wonderfully written! Well done :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful flowing piece that captures pisces very well. I'm a Pisces too so can relate. Milly x

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you Milly, I love meeting other Pisceans as I don't know very many x

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Congratulations on your first honourable mention (hm). This could easily have been a win, to be honest. However, I have no doubt at all that you will win any number of times with the talent you have already displayed. Well done again.

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you Ben, I really wasn't expecting it to be honest so am very very happy!! Will be writing another poem once I get back from holiday :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    JUDGES COMMENT: I am glad this young lady has decided to join our ever growing poetry site especially with wonderful pieces such as this. It may not be everyone's cup of tea but teas overrated anyway and we need more realistic (I use the term loosely) poets gracing us with their creative presence.

  • 5 years ago

    by Nicholosa Torres

    Love this poem, for it speaks volumes of me myself, keep up good writing