by Milly Hayward Jul 20, 2017
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Oh dismal world you have me flung |
by naaz
Milly, this time I want to start with the title of the poem. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Milly, you hit it out of the park! It's spot on, you bought the farm! It is something that I would have written in a heartbeat. You have portrayed the world and it's issues to a "T", the Media in bed with the Terrorists far away from those innocents who have to beg for a cup of tea. Truly a world under Satan's control, mankind has failed in its governing of the Earth. I can't wait until the Prince of Peace Jesus returns and as the Prophet Isaiah had written thousands of years ago, The Government shall be upon his shoulders! God will Govern with justice and Righteousness where man has miserably failed, the environment will be restored to an even better condition than it was in Creation before mankind fell. Great work, added to my Favorites! |
by Ren
A truly powerful write that reveals the many awful truths of our suffering world. Amazing job! |
by CJ Maleney
We are alive and kicking |
by Ren
<3 |
by mossgirl19
This is very powerful yet again, Milly. It is well-rhymed with a very challenging message. |