You have a way with words, it feels so real. Im sorry, this seems soooo sad, I hope everything is alright...LiL One

Another really painful poem. Poems about these types of situations always manage to suprise and shock me, because they are never cliche, and because I've never experienced anything like it. Good poem and nice work.

Great job that was awesome

i'm glad you find my pain funny ann, but i am not tryna be a comedian, and gery pessimist is spelt without an e, and it means you only see the bad things, but i see the good things too, and your an idiot, but thanks for makin it look like i got more comments anyway

*the cup is not half empty as pessimists say, as far as he sees theres nothing left in the cup*

hey again my bestest friend see how many people love your poems....now just imagine what it would be doing to u if u wernt writting because i know it helps u so much and if u wernt writting these people wouldnt have the previledge of reading your poems
luv ya babe luv jessycar

You are a very good writer. I love this poems. It say everything I feel and experienced that I was never able to write down. My poem Hurt Because I Hide is so much like yours but yours was able to say the words I could not. I envy you for that.

this is a really realistic and of course sad poem. but its how u feel put into poetry which is an art if u can do it! xx