by Brenda
Sai, this is just lovely. Your visuals are so beautiful, it flows so smoothly. Well done- |
by Sai
Thank you, Brenda. |
by hiraeth
Is nightbook a reference to the same titled album by Einaudi? If not, well you should check it out, it’s really good, some of my favourites on that album are ‘the crane dance’, ‘nightbook’ and both the snow preludes. Sorry, on a tangent. Your use of imagery is superb, and this is testimonial to that; I conjured up images that were a mix between ‘starry night’ and ‘the great wave’, for the first stanza, and the latter stanzas reminded me of a supernovae. I don’t know how else I could best describe it lol. |
by Sai
I'll be sure to listen to those. Also, I appreciate you saying that, as I could only hope to write something that's capable of evoking such magnificent images with words. Thank you. |
by Meena Krish
I like the way you have penned this, the images |
by Sai
Thank you, Meena. |
by mossgirl19
Congrats on your win, Sai! :-) |
by Sai
Thanks, Mel! |
by Meena Krish
Congrats on the Win! |
by Britt
Judging comment: The power someone can have over us, with their words, with their heart, with their actions, is an all consuming thing sometimes, and I felt like this piece pulled those feelings right from my heart. I love the flow of this poem, it was original and pulled me in with every word. Awesome job! |
by Sai
Thank you, Britt! |