by CJ Maleney Jul 25, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
love is
I lay in bed |
by Meena Krish
Nicely penned with a timed rhythm and rhyme...sweet :) |
by Michael
Nice one fella, |
by CJ Maleney
Thanks guys, think I was 24 when I wrote this, hidden away for 21 years. |
by mossgirl19
Awww...I thought of the movie Dear John while reading this...when you are in a very difficult place love can surely inspire you to continue on. Lovely write and as Ben said, early years poem but your great rhyming is already evident. |
Absolutely beautifully written. Well done :) x |