by Ben Pickard
I think, in honesty, for love to work, it has to be equal. In a relationship, people bring different qualities, certainly, but both individuals need to be given freedom and the right to express their ideas and opinions, else it all becomes stagnant very quickly. |
by Michael
A well written piece Miss M |
by Brenda
Miss Mel, this is such a sad write. I have been in that type of relationship, it's no fun. Relationships are give and take. When one feels the need to have total control it loses that "us" and just becomes about "them". There's a saying that goes; "He who cares the least has the most control". My ex was like that, he didn't care when he hurt us, nor that we were always wondering when he'd come home. He didn't care that his blowing off work would result in extremely short paychecks that did nothing to help pay the bills. He just didn't care and he controlled it all. This is not living, this is just existing. Hugs to you- |
Hello, Mel, |
by mossgirl19
Hello, Bradley. A comment is always appreciated and just because it's not the same with the others doesn't mean it's not okay with me. I agree with you that it is not something new, it's very true, as my friend Brenda has affirmed it thus. This situation of being controlled is clearly something any one in the whole world can experience, generation to generation. How you see the poem is important and I appreciate the time you have given to read this. :-) |
by Meena Krish
A one sided relationship will always bring smiles only |
The last line has its own heavy quality which is making this write remarkable. I like this write as it’s giving a great knowledge about love; one should always be good towards his partner. That’s only called a proper love. Each couple should make their own dream world of love. |
by anand singh
Beautifully penned. This piece can take on a different meaning. One is that of a follower and two, that of a person so captivated by the other's love that they'll obey every command. Yet it's beautifully penned. An enjoyable read. |
by Lucifer
I know a woman she is married and she is suffering the same. |