by mossgirl19
A greatly rhymed poem with a great advice! |
Thanks Mel !!! I am glad you liked the poem :-) |
by Em
I wish I could nominate this but I'm out. This is a powerful and hard hitting piece. I made sure when I have my niece's and nephew that I take them on a walk and limit their TV time etc.. it's so infuriating to see empty parks or parks with kids who are meant to be enjoying playing together on their phones!! |
Thanks Em !!! I also felt this is a relevant topic.. Infact my friend prodded me to pen it down based on her experience with her kids. |
by Tanu Ghai
Awesome sami... wat use of words ???????? Simply beautiful |
Thanx dear... For your kind words. |
Wow.. |
Ty :-) |
by Sushmita Mitra Chetri
With the developing technology, we are forgetting what is best for us....We are more engrossed in the artificiality of things around us. |
Dear Winnie... Thanks for your comments. I also felt its quite a relevant topic and penned down my thots. |
Dear Winnie... Thanks for your comments. I also felt its quite a relevant topic and penned down my thots. |
Really very enjoyable well rhymed piece with great subject matter. Technology may save time but it removes so much more with regards to learning life skills. When we were young we would go to the library and search through hundreds of books to find the answers to questions for the weekly competition. There would be lots of kids all competing but equally forming new friendships and teams would sprout up all working together with much discussion and debate on what the questions really meant etc. Now we just Google everything. |
Thanks Milly !!! Am really glad you liked it. :-) |