by mossgirl19 Aug 1, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Forgive me, of my thinking |
by Lucifer
The best part of this poem is the flow. I love the ending too. |
by hiraeth
This is a mellifluous write, and euqally sweet too. Well done. :) |
by Sai
I was half expecting a reveal of what name you'd choose while reading and I'm glad this ended the way it did. Humility exudes from this piece. Well done! |
by Brenda
Lady Mel, wonderfully written. I love the flow! Beautiful. |
Straight from the heart..... Ur writing is an art !!! Keep going, poetess... :-) |