Frostbite

by Kasie   Aug 3, 2017


The acidity of emotions burn,

As they trickle down frail cheeks.

Seeping into the delusional pain,

That make the confident weak.
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The frigid hands of desolation's grip,

Numbs the wintry artic hearts.

Disheartened by a single frozen touch,

They are left to fall apart.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Kasie,

    It's great to see you writing again. You have always had a very natural way with rhyming poetry (I remember how well you took to sonnets) and this is no exception.
    I know you have been struggling a bit recently and the darkness that surrounds this piece is testament to that. Keep looking up, though, and I promise it will pass.
    Take care,
    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, its slowly getting better.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, this is beautiful, Kasie. There is a silent sadness in this piece that resonated with me.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, this is beautiful, Kasie. There is a silent sadness in this piece that resonated with me.

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