Comments : Desire to escape

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, Mystic. This is so refreshing, what a joy to read!!! I love this very much. You really can connect with nature well. Added to faves!

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you mossgirl I really appreciate it!! X

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Wonderful piece of imagination sweetheart. Really well structured and a joy to read
    Well done you

    Lots of love

    Dad xxxx

    • 7 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      I can sense a really proud dad here. :-)

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you dad love you lots xxxx

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Beautifully written. I love the visuals and your need to escape and recharge. Totally relatable to me.

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you for your comment Brenda. Some times all I think about is getting away for a while.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This literally resonated throughout every fibre of my being. I have had much the same thought over and over throughout my life: to just be free - completely. Nominated.
    All the very best,
    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you very much Ben. Yes it is a reoccuring thought that i am sure I will turn into reality some day. Oh wow i really appreciate the nomination!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is truly amazing! To be completely free of any heartache etc etc would be amazing. Well done on a fantastically rhymed piece

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Yes it really would be amazing! Thank you Em :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Relate so well to this, beautifully written as well. HM greatly deserved. :)

    • 7 years ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you for the comments Mark and taking the time to read my poems. :) x