Ms. Meena this is captivating... Wow.

Wonderful piece from you Meena. Love the repetitive words in between

Michael :)

Hello Meena/

This is excellent but - no surprise here - I do love the rhymes in this.
All the best as ever,
Ben

Meena, love this. A lot of sadness wrapped up.in these words. Hugs-

I love this poem, I see so many things in it. Perfectly penned as all your poetry is. I've always been a huge fan of your style. It's never anything short of excellent.