by mossgirl19
So beautiful, Michael. Who is getting married again? Awww. :-) |
by Michael
Thank you Miss M, |
by Ben Pickard
Michael, I have been away for a week, only to return to you writing flawless sonnets. You have it with this one, good fellow. The meter, syllables, rhyme, everything - spot on. It's poetry like this that keeps me coming back to the site. |
A very strong piece of writing. Every line was important and giving new information, and not simply regurgitating a previous line in a different way to make a rhyme work. I also enjoyed your use of the English language, too: simple but varied. |
by Michael
Thank you Bradley |
Beautiful poem Dad xxxx |
by Michael
Thank you sweetheart :) |
by Lucifer
Michael , I think in the 5th line it is sacred instead of scared, please correct it if I am right. |
by Michael
Thank you for the typo error Lucifer, now changed :) |