Comments : No need

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Welcome to the site, Jenny. Great write and great to see a fellow rhymer and one that rhymes so well.
    All the best and keep posting,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Lucifer

    The whole poem rhymes well except the last line.
    And what you have tried to tell in this poem is normal these days, but at the same time it's a problem.