Definitely - without question - the best piece I've read from you so far. The rhythm was strong, the content had depth, that there was a wonderful variety of language. I really enjoyed this piece from you. Well done.

One super minor issue. In the third line of the fifth stanza, I think it was supposed to be 'if', not 'of'. But other than that. Great work

It's a long poem, but the rhythm; the message you have tried to give connects the reader through out the poem.
Last stanza, really makes the difference and the last two lines gives it the perfect end.