Hey Scott this is a sad yet beautiful story and one which many have been through I don't believe in things like that or atleast I didn't until I saw my Nan sat on the edge of my bed after she'd died... Anyhow that gentleman will certainly be able to rest now knowing he did his country proud. I have to admit that the rhyming was a little forced in places (just my view) but all in all a fab rhymed story
Em x