by Scott Cole
Love it |
A very intriguing piece. It had a real sense of maturity to it. A sense of character. Someone that has experience life, and has a good sense of who they are. The Last line of the second stanza especially was powerful yet simple. Aided of course by the entire stanza before it, but it was a wonderful climax. Topping, you might say. |
by Lucifer
Nice Analogy. |
by The Po whet
This is lovely,something you wrote from deep within your heart. |