Comments : Loaded Words:

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Right! Nice flowing rhymed write.

  • 7 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Oh, I did enjoy this. Short, tightly flowing stanza packed with power and wisdom. Each stanza had it's purpose and something that made it stick out. A great way to start it, too. A very strong opening like. Good length and title, too. Very enjoyable.

  • 7 years ago

    by Tonia

    Well done! x