Beautiful I love how it flows. Just carries your emotions

This is an interesting piece, and I like how you're playing around with rhymes.

Just an observation: I feel you sometimes add words in lines that don't really need to be there other than to serve the rhythm. Most of these are 'And's at the starts or lines, but I think if play around with some of those lines - or probably more accurately: give it some thought for future works - you may be able to cut out some of those lesser interesting words, and pack the line with even more oomph.

Also, for me personally, the last line felt awkward. One, because it's a double negative, and two because of the structuring of the line, though of course, maybe that was in fact you intention.