by mossgirl19 Aug 14, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Why is love ever among their lips? |
by RustySoul
That's one lovely poem Mel..! It's rhythmic and the imagery is vivid. |
by Michael
Lovely piece Miss M |
by Lucifer
How you write such pieces. I mean I am totally jealous of you. I don't know what inspired you to write this poem. You know they say love is the most beautiful feeling, but you made love even more beautiful in the eye of the reader. Especially in the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th stanza. |
by The Po whet
A very nice piece,speaks volume of yearning for love.well done. |
I enjoyed this. The sentiment, the beautiful language, all ties together with some wonderful lines, like "And of love that spans the space" in the fifth stanza. 'Spans the space', oh I liked that very much. |