What a captivating dark piece. It was wonderfully worded all the way. Very atmospheric. Great work here, Michael.

nominated.. the end. well done

You got this!!! This is one of my favorite forms, this is beautiful...dark...and just wow!

L-o-v-e love love this !!!

I like this form and I liked the topic you have chosen to
write for this form. The story unfolds step by step and the rhymes
flow with ease taking us along on the ride...excellent!