Each one of us is hanging by a thread and we are doing the things as the creator tells us to do.
I totally agree with you that for some of us the burden of our decisions, our lifestyle put too much weight upon the thread.
we go into stress, anxiety, depression and start thinking of breaking the thread and become free.

I loved second stanza the most because it happens with many people. I mean the more they try to solve the daily issues of their lives, the more complicated their lives become.

I can feel the emotions..the flow, rhymes all went good.

Nice work.

Most enjoyable read

Kitty-Kat Lady

Such a wonderful piece, that sheds a saddened light. But put together really well

Much love

Michael :)

Really good detailed expansion of the expression 'hanging by a thread' nicely done!