Comments : Truth

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I love this, Shane - almost a tongue-twister that I had to read twice. Nominated.

    • 7 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Hi Ben. Thank you for appreciating the wordplay I did for this piece. Been months since the last time i posted here.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hello, Shane...a thought-provoking write and as Ben pointed out, almost a tongue-twister which flowed out very well. Great write!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely put Shane, loved the flow with this and the thoughts behind it.

    • 7 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Thank you Brenda.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Fantabulous Shane and great to see you back writing glad it's nominated and it's definitely a inspirational write

    • 7 years ago

      by Saakiel

      Hi Em. Thank you. Yes I'm back here in pnq. I appreciate it <3