Cry

by nikki   Jul 10, 2004


I see him in the corner
as small as he can be
but when i go to hug him
he turns away from me
his eyes are cold and glassy
and show no pain or fear
until his eyes close
and he sheds a single tear
i take him by the hand
and look him in the eyes
i hold him close to me
and listen to his cries
he whispers in my ear
then slowly walks away
but just how can i tell you,
his mother died today..

*this poem was actually written by my best friend but it means a lot to her and she would appreciate any feedback, please vote and comment*

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  • 20 years ago

    by kid.baby.

    good flow and good ideas. real life is the best inspiration! xx

  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    she has joined, her names jess, look up one of her poems, she rocks, try 'lonely-dedicated to my bf kenny' or 'inside voice' they is my faves

  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    hey jessy if ya read this, i love this poem sooo much baby so proud of you, i wouldn't be able to write this good about somethin that hurts that much, great work bubs, rock on

    WE RIDE TOGETHER WE DIE TOGETHER BEST FRIENDS FOR LIFE!!!!
    love your bestie, nikki

  • 20 years ago

    by CC

    very well written poem.. tell your friend that I thought it was awsome and that its very sad... tell her to keep writing and maybe to join to poems-and-quotes...;)

  • 20 years ago

    by Briana.

    this is a really good poem...i know its sad but i can relate to the same thing so i guess it means alot to me to. dont stop writing.

    briana

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