Comments : Armoury

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    It's funny how much we can build with words and how much we can destroy. The former is obviously the sensible choice, but we're not always a sensible lot are we?

    Great write and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Another really solid write Kitty. I sense this is written from the thoughts and perspective of someone on the recieving end of a domestic verbal abuse situation? The reference to 'us' might mean kids are involved as well. I hope this is not from personal experience :-(

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Not so much domestic abuse as maybe how a long series of rows can chip away at love, fondness and respect. I was mostly thinking of love relationships but as I wrote, even rows with siblings crept in too. The need to win an argument often gets in the way of actually resolving the issue ... I've probably been guilty of that myself!
      So glad you liked it :-)
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Mandy

    I really loved this, so well written. I myself have made the mistake at chipping away at something then being horribly sad when I've driven someone away. Ive been on both sides. This is something everyone could bear to read and learn from.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Mandy. Yes I think we're probably all guilty of this at some point. I'm so glad you loved it.
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Jamie

    I believe this to be your best rhyming poem. It flows so naturally and hides a sad message within. Well done.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Hey thanks Jamie, I'm quite proud of this one :-)
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Lucifer

    In my own opinion, Women are not equal, they deserve way more than men.
    Still they have to go through mental or physical trauma at some point in their life.
    They tolerate it everything , sometimes as a wife, as a daughter, sometimes as a sister, and most of the women tolerate it as a mother.

    Respect for women...

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Lucifer, although I'm sure most women give as good as they get when it comes to having an argument :-)
      But yeah, you're right ... women totally rock! Lol
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I love this.

    The message is a pretty simple one. Discuss things and be reasonable.

    We can all be di(£s at times, especially when tempers flare. Male or female. When things ain't working you have to sort it out. If you cannot then everyone loses.

    Well voiced.

    Craig

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Craig, and you're totally right! Glad you loved it :-)
      =^^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, love This! How very true this is. No matter how upset you may be you still need to speak with respect, discuss not lob grenades. A lot of damage comes about when words,are spewed in anger.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Hi Brenda,
      Did you love my poem or Craig's comment on my poem? Lol ... I hope it's both, and thanks .. I'm definitely guilty of lobbing a few verbal grenades in my time!
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Risqué

    I adore this! Almost wish I could use it as a disclaimer when meeting new people. If only that were acceptable ;)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Haha ... that would be cool eh "pleased to meet you ... please read and sign here ..."
      Lol
      I'm glad you liked it, thanks x
      =^.^=